ramon156
2 hours ago
Why even have a blog when you can't be arsed to write the posts. This is so obviously LLM-written. I have a positive view of Shopify engineers, but this kind of made a dent in that confidence.
briga
an hour ago
What exactly makes it "obvious" that this is written by AI? I could totally believe that AI was used to generate parts of it, but I really don't get the sense that the whole thing was written that way. I've seen way worse examples on this site.
As software engineers we are constantly told that we need to heavily use these tools for our daily work. So is it surprising that software engineers use the same tools as writing aids? Using AI does not mean no human effort was involved.
energy123
an hour ago
Subheading and dot point spam, low density writing (the opposite of standard technical english), including useless detail (like enumerating stats on Shopify's scale), using contrastive parallelism, and other llm-isms. Even if it's not AI it's bad writing done by someone who has picked up AI's worst ticks.
For example this subheading:
> "The real bottleneck: connections, not CPU"
That's two AI smells. AI likes to say vacuous punchy statements like "the final takeaway" or "here's the rub". Then contrastive parallelism "connections, not CPU". Contrastive parallelism should scarcely exist in technical writing, regardless of whether it's AI generated.
KronisLV
19 minutes ago
I really wish that slop writing was disincentivized in whatever RLHF they do. I don’t want to read the weird LinkedIn pop-sci tone for the rest of my life in such amounts.
I wonder if the average reader is also getting annoyed like this or whether they just don’t care - especially seeing what seems to get upvoted on your run of the mill social media sites. They probably collectively shape things more than I do.
12387128
an hour ago
Because the post is just rambling without a clear intent or direction. Why do you need "oversell protection" if you have "transactions". Isn't the whole point of a "transaction" that it handles concurrency and disk failures?
resonious
7 minutes ago
I work with Shopify often and the whole oversell protection thing is like a huge joke.
Oversell happens because Shopify doesn't decrement inventory until payment is confirmed. And they apparently would rather die than change that invariant.
filcuk
an hour ago
People see an — dash and kneejerk. Writers are deciding to stop using this valid punctuation because of this exact reaction, it's ridiculous.
briga
an hour ago
A true casualty of AI. Em-dashes used to be one of my favorite punctuation devices, now I find myself consciously editing them out of my writing.
tonyhart7
6 minutes ago
unfortunately its new normal now
lp4v4n
an hour ago
I agree with you, it doesn't take long to identify the itemized style that LLMs use and it's always incredibly annoying.
I would rather read the original thoughts of the engineer, grammar mistakes and stylistic imperfections included, than prompt generated AI slop.
cowboylowrez
an hour ago
I just wanted to drop a note that I almost never go into an article or blog wondering if its AI or not. I am trying to be a more picky reader and try to actually do something occasionally but I do browse database articles and this is a good one. So I wonder, am I becoming insensitive about AI writing? Am I being hypnotized into taking whatever color pill thats had a color representing a surrender to the AI "hive mind" whatever that is?
So I'm sort of curious, did you not like the AI writing style or just rejecting AI in general? I myself am very conflicted, I think AI in its current form is the wrong tech at the wrong time yet I don't mind reading AI text and sort of mooch off of googles free tier.
Also I'm starting to notice lots of AI smearing, I read folks online describing someone elses contribution as "obviously AI" and I'm suspecting in some cases these could be false accusations.
I'm thinking about starting a blog, so when my AI gf writes posts, do I ask her to try to "not read like an AI"? Anybody try that? I'm gonna try that. Hehe for all you know I already did hehe